True Love

True Love

A Poem by .
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Giving a friend some advice

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My dear friend I'm sure,
You'll find, you're true love.
One day.

It doesn't matter if you're late,
Just don't ever give up.

Hope will guide you, to and Fro,
While destiny will meet,
And faith,
My dear one,
It all depends on you.

© 2012 .


Author's Note

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Pls review :)

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Words of wisdom, dear poet... :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


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12 Years Ago

Tnx! :D
What I said on the last poem applies to this one too. Connect the lines and merge them into more. Incorrect "you're" It's not you are.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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12 Years Ago

Tnx...again
I can see this being a really good song :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


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12 Years Ago

Tnx, Rebbie! :D
"It all, depends on you." I love it!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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12 Years Ago

Thank u very much! :D
Bluefire

12 Years Ago

No problemo :3
I really liked it.

Sounds like a song, or someting

Posted 12 Years Ago


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12 Years Ago

Yeah it does sound like one now that I think about it and tnx for reviewing! :)
Reminds me of 'Penguin' by Christina Perri.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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12 Years Ago

Yeah now that I think about it it does. Tnx for reviewing

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