True Love

Giving a friend some advice

My dear friend I'm sure,

You'll find, you're true love.

One day.

It doesn't matter if you're late,

Just don't ever give up.

Hope will guide you, to and Fro,

While destiny will meet,

And faith,

My dear one,

It all depends on you.

Author's Note

Pls review :)

Reviews

[Shesentangels]

I like this!! So many people in high school and at young ages are impatient for love because they see everyone else around them has it. But they should never lower their standards or rush into something that isn't real!

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Thanks I'm glad u liked it! ^.^

[Sharon]

Your poem spoke to me. It has a wonderful flow and truthful feelings.

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^.^ Thank u! Ur putting my hopes up somehow, I appreciate it!

[Sharon]

I'm glad I can help. You are also a very influential writer.

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Tnx! ^-^

[Sharon]

:)

[Jo March]

So sweet and innocent, the hopeful, childlike charm of it all.

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Thanks! I'm glad u enjoyed it! :D

[Hidden Happiness]

:-D.

[Hidden Happiness]

You have become my favourite with your sweet words:-)o_O.

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Thanks, I'm flattered :)

[Hidden Happiness]

:-D.

[Miss. Smith]

can't believe you are only 11!!!

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:)

[Miss. Smith]

That's a sweet little poem that sums up love perfectly, a hard thing to acheive

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Glad u liked it! :)

[Cynthia Man]

A sweet poem! Love is never late as long as it is real! Everything worths waiting to the end! All we have to do is to try our very best and not to regret anything! Its one beautiful little poem!

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So true what u said, and tnx for reviewing! :)

[Cynthia Man]

ur welcome :D

[SHEEMA HUQ]

nice to meet some fresh talented new blood, these are insightful words of wisdom which you are expressed very nicely, and only 11 years old! well done!

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Tnx! I'm glad u liked it! :) Truly flattered!