The wind

What I feel about the wind

The wind is so invisible,

I could hardly touch it.

It blows on my face,

Showing its elegance and my thoughts,

Blow away with it.

The wind,

It makes me feel protected, 

And so strong.

My hair flows with it,

While my body,

Shifts in the same place.

Wind can get angry,

Sweet and caring,

Everyday it changes like us.

Wind will always be there,

For us,

All eternity, it is our true friend.

Author's Note

Pls review

Reviews

[Sharon]

This is great! It makes me feel like I can sense the emotions. Beautifully written. The last line also makes a great impression. Nice job! ^.^

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:D glad u liked it!

[Sharon]

It's great :)

[Hidden Happiness]

Darling, yes youre right...the wind will always be our friend...a beautiful piece truly:-):-):-D

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Thanks I'm glad u liked it

[Louise D.]

I love how it paints a vivid image!

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Thanks! :)

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Tnx! :)

[Miss. Smith]

once again you have achieved something that is hard to by describing the wind in such a beautiful fashion. Good write!

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Tnx, really glad u liked it! :)

[White_lily]

good write :)

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Thanks much! :)

[Westminster Abbey]

Wow. This is beautiful. I've never been able to describe the wind like this. How Amazing! 100/100

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I'm glad u like it and tnx for reviewing! :D

[SHEEMA HUQ]

absolutely beautiful! I mean it and this wonderful characterisation of the wind is sooo appealing, reminding me of my own childhood, smiling on a school journey to wales, when i was about your age...on pony treks as the cool wind vaccumed my face and limbs... you are a great young talent indeed!

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Tnx! I'm glad u liked it! :)

[Lehlohonolo Lichaba]

i love it

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I'm glad u like it! And tnx for reviewing! :D

[Rhianne Ney]

That's right, you can see it but you can feel it!
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It's always like that! :D Thanks!

[Rhianne Ney]

You're welcome