Fame that I'll never get

I feel a breeze 

That frees 

My soul

From the role

It has to play

To get to broadway

But I know it will never happen

Like there was never a dragon

I cry and scream

Till I can't dream

I only get nightmares

Which never compares

To the betray

To get to broadway

Author's Note

ignore grammar problems, pls review I would love to know what u think

Reviews

[Katherine Enma Pineappl..]

Ah a dream so hard to be realized right?

Like the poem :)

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Yes, very hard. Tnx for reading! :)

[Summer'sBreeze]

I love your flowing rhymes!
A piece well done. :))

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Tnx! :)

[FrancescaX]

every body wants to get to broadway. i read a book about a girl's struggle to get the fame.
nice poem.

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Tnx :)

[Sam]

Wow, great poem. Like the rhyming.

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Tnx

[Tai Ryens]

Don't be so hard on yourself. Strive for better; improve your pieces, and you'll be there in no time.

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Tnx it's true

[LJB]

Great job! I know exactly how you feel..........

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Tnx

[∠( ᐛ 」..]

The flow is really great.
Great work!
100/100

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Tnx alot! :)

[SilentDreamer]

Flows just perfect:)

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Tnx

[kublakhan27]

Your rhyming is great...nice job :)

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Tnx