Obession

 

Obession

 

She takes her step

Within my step

She takes my breath

As her breath

She inquires into my   

Social stratosphere

Noting the names into

Her blackberry

She corrects my jargon

To distinguish herself

The possibility of my perfection

Scares her soul

With ease she manipulates

As if it’s in her genetics

She plucks at me with her

Genetic tweezers pulling in every direction

 

She tries too hard I hear them whisper

Turning in her direction

When will she learn?

She would be happy knowing that

All isn’t going well for you

She tries to make it possible

Each and everyday she fails

Obsessed with the obsession of perfection

Reviews

[Cre8tiveheart]

Words that can sum up several Mother/Daughter relationships that I know. Very well written.

[Sarah]

A powerful piece that a lot of people can relate to in their relationships. At first I thought it was going to be a romantic piece but then it turned into something more. Something that really make you rethink about how you're treating the relationship you're in. A truly Beautiful work that I really enjoyed reading.