Doom

wishing to find help

In the silence of another

The darkness creeps

Light falling behind

As they go closer to their doom

Their screams for help were not heard

Their plead to be rescued was never found

Find help before it's gone..

Author's Note

This came to me during school so i wrote it on a piece of paper fast lol(:

Reviews

[Mizuki Tsukiakari]

I think you have a really good start. It feels like it should be more detailed and longer. Of course, you said it was something you scribled down fast, but this is really good. I think you should add more to this. Great job!