Hatred

I wrote this poem in school, but I also turned this into a song! :)

I have felt hatred over a person who was always there

We can fight until the end

Everybody will decend

Falling hope

Going down

Until we all hit the ground

I am calling every way

Now it doesn't matter what you say

Author's Note

I wrote this because it's true :)

Reviews

[LeeAnne]

Awesome. I can really relate to this. It's great. Keep up the good work. :D

[Hippy]

i like this its short meaningful id like to see some of your pieces extended longer

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the poem. It flowed like music. I could feel the anger and disappointment in your words. A excellent poem.
Coyote