A little less pain

How, I was glad to be in the pouring rain,

Only now I was drowning in something other than my own thoughts.

I never begged for happiness just a little less pain,

I endured so much pain trying not to lose you,

I ended up loosing myself.

Reviews

[William Liston]

Once again, this is short and sweet. The imagery was amazing. I could feel your emotion.

-William Liston

[Crystal Frampton]

Thank you,
c.

[Esteban Luis Soto]

I really liked the imagery here. I like the idea of rain replacing the torrent of thoughts, if even for just a moment. Great job!

[Crystal Frampton]

Thank you for your comments,
c.