That Feeling

Talking to you was pretty destructive,

We spoke from good morning to good night,

And then we said nothing at all,

I chocked on the words that were stuck in my throat,

We always spoke about the loneliest feeling in the world,

Suddenly we're drowning in this feeling,

And we're trying to remember what it felt like to breathe.

Reviews

[JMaster1]

very nice , your words are beautiful

[Crystal Frampton]

Thank you,
c.

[Alex Carter]

Nice poem, I thoroughly enjoyed it. Its simplicity is its excellence. So much emotion packed into such a small package, and I really felt it. I minor spelling mistake, though I am sure you already saw it. Choked. Beautiful imagery, thank you for sharing! I am going to read through your other poems too, if you don't mind.

[Crystal Frampton]

Thank you Alex Carter, and yes, soon after I realised my minor spelling mistake! And sure, thank you, your comment means alot!

[Alex Carter]

You are very welcome :)