Silver Trampolines in the Gloom

Silver Trampolines in the Gloom

A Poem by Crystal Antlers

Drifting in the forest all alone
Shaded silver trampolines were floating in the sky
She was dreaming in the gloom.
A clearing in the foggy woods
Slow tornadoes
Comforting, warm winds
Tiny sailboats filled with snails.
 Swimming around her
 Swimming in her mind
In a daze
Spinning in the forest all alone.
Shadows in the sky
Dark dream
In a daze
Whales twisting around slide trombones
Whirling with blissful confusion
Spinning softly with the shadows.
Whales sailing in the dark trees.
Rustling branches falling slowly
Flowing in the wind
Owls sinking with the branches
Owls with eight eyes
Dreaming in the darkness.

© 2013 Crystal Antlers


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Crystal Antlers
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Reminds me of a Salvidor Dahli painting

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 11 Years Ago


Crystal Antlers

11 Years Ago

really? which one?
eglantine

11 Years Ago

not one in particular, but more like his style

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Added on March 11, 2013
Last Updated on March 14, 2013
Tags: whales, whaleand, surreal, surrealism, abstract, tornadoes, forest, trampolines, wind, dreaming, dream, slow, daze, confusion, foggy, owls
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