Inner Fight

Unnoticed, Unloved

   Oh how there are things...

             ...I could think of.

My world is lost

 Spiraling down into the depths

The raging fire burning to the touch

       Where my soul is being kept

Two worlds colliding...

     Fighting in turmoil...

...Only one will survive

That survivor..

              Will eat me alive!

No escape from the pain

  Oh how I try to run

Just to escape the blood rain!

 PAIN LET ME BE!!!!

Climb to the top of the peak!

   What do I see?...

Everlasting world of hate...

  May my soul die in this fight...

...Return to thy fire grave...

.........................................

And fine peace...

Reviews

[MichelleClay]

What a wonderful piece. My heart reaches out to this poor soul and hopes to grow wings to lift him from this place of despair.

[lovejulez03]

I very much enjoyed this piece!! The emotions were described very well and I felt every bit of this poem. Thank you for sharing, well done!

[Adelia Alighieri]

How amazing is this! My first read after returning to the Cafe, totally refreshing!

[Lost-in-Fantasy16]

This is very good. Im just lost for words on what to say

[alexlessah]

Amazing write

[STAR CHILD]

This is gripping grabs you from the beginning and holds you till the end it is sad but a very good poem

[Lily Mae]

Great write Crystal...xx

[Silent Serenity also kn..]

Wow Shiningwolf, very powerful write here! You have allowed your readers into the depths of your soul! Pain is always the ugly beast that rears it's head! I pray there is a light at the end of your darkness! Very well written! Keep up your amazing talent! :)