Forever Comfort

A calming breeze hits my face

                        Rocking my body

The scenery is so breathtaking

The stars glitter with essence of purity

                                    The sky is merely a canvas

They create their picture

The snowy mountains enjoy the show

                                     Picturing what will happen next.

The world is sparkling

         Beauty in nature is so strong

A sense of peace flows through my body with complete harmony

                                  Falling back on nature's green pillow

I can see ages through the stars

                             Suddenly,

Dark clouds cover the sky

                           Darkening the show

                             It's blackout time

As they release their raindrops

                         It's magical

The whole landscape seems to come alive

                         And I am apart of it

The glowing sky lights up

And let's out its roar!

                         Covering the land with its raindrops

Feeding the life.

Soaking wet now, I try to stand

                          Only to fall to my knees

The land...

Everything is glisening

                          The grass has a radiance

Calming my body

I can feel a warm hug from this scene

                         Tears fall from my eyes

Only to be covered by the skies rain

This place is so magical

                         It's my own love..

This land is my comfort and I am it's lover.

 

Reviews

[Linear]

Beautiful scenery you paint with your mind, a place we would all wish to be/see:....lovely words in poetry

[patricia]

That was good, some memorable thoughts. Full of awe and appreciation. Thankyou

[KAREN]

Beautiful, and with the imagery it's a work of art!

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

This poem was like a movie rolling before my eyes, I could picture each scene!
Beautiful poem!

[Hayley]

What wonderful imagery! I like how you played with the structure of this poem and made it your own unique format. Great write :)

[Lily Mae]

You have chills running up and down my arm.. You have captured the beauty of your heart well.. and thank you for sharing it with all of us.. :)xx a new favorite.. xx