Humanity

Humanity

A Poem by Shiningwolf

Standing upon this mighty land

The wind blowing through my hair

The endless wild sky covered in clouds

Constricting my thoughts

 

I must know the secret of life

A ray of hope pierces the blanket of fog

Beam down upon me!

Must stay grounded

 

A rush takes over my pride and stature

King and Queen of this world

It's all in my grasp

Let me take to this sky

And make my name

 

Holding my arms out like wings

I can feel the sensation of flying

Looking down on the ground

I can still see my feet

 

Stubborn to believe I am still grounded

A song played for warriors of the past is humming

As I stand here today

I am all mighty against this world

For I am part of humanity!

© 2011 Shiningwolf


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Shiningwolf
For "I Challenge You" Group

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Not exactly what I expected, but such is Humanity. A pleasant read. You seem poised in your stand in/with/against the world.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Very strong write from just viewing this picture. I am impressed as I am still blank when looking at this pic even though I like it. The sensation of flying makes me remember an out of body experience where I was flying and yet my body was on the ground. I relate that to this write and to me this is saying the person was so intune spiritually that they had an out of body experience. Humanity is strongest when it stands against a challenge with a humble heart. Outstanding write I love this it is perfect!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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an inspirational song! love the last stanza especially..

Posted 13 Years Ago


A blend of as above so below.. great write.. x

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Shiningwolf
Shiningwolf

Mustang, OK



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My name is Crystal. I am 23 years old. I am who I am. I am just a girl trying to traverse through the challenges of this life. I write to express myself and to create art that has meaning. more..

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