Dreamland

A dream of dreams

Crossing over into the light

A magical feeling from the overpass

Staring my soul down with an intent

 

The bridge made of hope

Shining with the love of kisses so sweet

A thousand birds fly over the erodic scene

Stretching for an enternity, the clouds cover

 

Time stops, forever frozen in time

The grass dances to the rhythm of the wind

A sun that shines brightly everyday

Putting a dash of happiness on my clean face

 

Splashing with delight of the cool mist

My body flowing through paradise in fast motions

A warm hug touches my heart and soul

The birds lift me into the air

 

Up into the clouds the sight is mesmerizing

The wide open range of sky

Suddenly dark clouds appear

And lighting strikes my body down

 

What an adrenline rush!

I am not dead, no the climax of all ages

My perfect little dream world

Is always here when I am with you.

 

Reviews

[Awkward]

A dream of dreams
I just loved that line!
It said so little yet it made me think of so much!

[dreaming dame]

Wow, I almost get lost in this poem! All your poetry in general. Keep it up!! :):)

[patricia]

Like this poem a lot, the way you describe love being like a drug, and the poems tender vulnerability. Thanks

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

The words flow like a vision, excellent poem my friend.

[Sweets]

This is beautiful!
I love such poems, describing nature and freedom..
The ending makes the scene romantic :)
Great work!
(adding it to my favs)

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Such a beautiful warm fuzzy delighful poem on love, excellent.

[GlamGirl]

I've never been in love, so I can't relate. I like all of the powerful words and imagery though. Great job!

[pheasant]

Beautifully laid out nature scenes soothe the senses... "And lightening strikes my body down"... that could be a little more than an adrenaline rush... LOL
I really enjoyed this. Well done.

[Hayley]

Fantastic imagery. Swear I am in summer...until it gets stormy and I realize I am dreaming. I like the underlying meaning too: The speaker is here with her lover when things get bad, he is always there. That's what this poem said to me :)

[Murtuza]

It's warm and wonderful. Well done :)