Teardrops

Saddness flows through my body

Heart wrenching pain attacks me

Draining my every will

No more happiness is felt

 

Traveling through my veins

Causing me to weep so slowly

Undesirable shocks of reality

Blasting me in the mind and soul

 

Eyes becoming the faucets

With no way of turning them off

Teardrops sprinkle out

With each one a dream falls

 

Sparkling with pure sorrow

A pain no one wants to see

Chilling down into the very core

A soul dies from the pain

 

Dripping down the outer shell

The one that is crumbling down

Giving up the point of battle

When there is nothing left

 

Teardrops crash down on the floor

An ocean for creatures so small

Wailing with anguish

A dark cloud forms in the heart

 

Alone and forgotten

And broken as well

Teardrops show the pain

But only half is shown

 

Never shower the space around

Never give life from tears

Holding back the pain

Store it away into your soul....

 

Teardrops form the chapters of life

They also end them as well...

Reviews

[BlackMoonRising]

Wow great job. Showing your feelings through your writing...I find it amazing you can do it very well.

[Hayley]

Quick fix: the word undesirable is spelled wrong in the 2nd stanza.
I really like this. You described tears very well and I love the last 2 stanzas where it really ended this piece. You make a good point: Teardrops do form the chapters of life, good and bad. They also end them well through happiness and sorrow. Good write!

[Lily Mae]

Tears like rain always wash away the pain..xx Great write.xx

[Deactivated_BurningDemo..]

An amazing view on tears. You took something quite ordinary and gave it a beautiful twist. I really love this poem. Amazing.