Love at its Prime

Seeing you stand over there

My heart flutters its wings

Wanting to say the unspeakable words

Trapped in inocence itself

 

A barrier blocks us

The owner is me

Feelings develop fear

Only covered by the redish cheeks

 

Racing faster than any car

My mind drains its energy

Anxiety takes over

The unbearable shaking occurs

 

Fireflies beauty

All embeded with the sound of oceans waves crashing

Perfect music with words spoken so sweet

Standing in awe of him

 

A different universe

With the two of us at standby

Waiting for one's eyes to meet the other

Two create something so beautiful

Soo beautiful that words can't describe.

 

Finally at long last

Eyes meet and harmony strikes the scene

Love's first sight has popped its magic

Our love story begins...

 

Reviews

[BlackMoonRising]

I have no words to describe my satisfaction. (But great job!)

[Lily Mae]

"Fireflies beauty
All embeded with the sound of oceans waves crashing
Perfect music with words spoken so sweet
Standing in awe of him" I love this so much.. This is a great write...I think it's perfect and beautiful....xxx

[Colleen C Dunphy]

Oh...I love the fluttering wings of love at first glance. It is amazing how one look can make everything right in the world.

[SpokenWord]

Oh you just knew that he was one and only a first glance was needed for it to start. Love is innocent it is most evident at the beginning of love where all things between the two seem like magic and moves the soul, mind and body with ease of pure delight. Very loving and very beautiful.