Love at its Prime

Seeing you stand over there

My heart flutters its wings

Wanting to say the unspeakable words

Trapped in inocence itself

 

A barrier blocks us

The owner is me

Feelings develop fear

Only covered by the redish cheeks

 

Racing faster than any car

My mind drains its energy

Anxiety takes over

The unbearable shaking occurs

 

Fireflies beauty

All embeded with the sound of oceans waves crashing

Perfect music with words spoken so sweet

Standing in awe of him

 

A different universe

With the two of us at standby

Waiting for one's eyes to meet the other

Two create something so beautiful

Soo beautiful that words can't describe.

 

Finally at long last

Eyes meet and harmony strikes the scene

Love's first sight has popped its magic

Our love story begins...

 

Reviews

[SilentLullabies]

It is beautiful. Love poems always gives me those butterflies in my stomch. So sweet!!!

[Madison A. Wright]

I love this poem...when love begins!! The meeting of the eyes...feeling eachothers emotions and feelings... great poem.. i feel every word you wrote relate to me.

[Just Brooke]

Captivating imagery! Very beautiful=] I loved it!

[Jessica Marlow]

i love it. the baeuty of first love or love at first sight:)

[Ayumu♥]

Very sweet and well written. i really liked reading this. Keep writing!

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Romanticly written! Great imagery.

[xjust-for-me.x]

in your words you explain the beginnings of love. wonderfully written.

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

A beautiful poem of the purest love.

[howlfjdks]

Beautiful truffle of love you captured.

[Ravyne Hawke]

Simply beautiful.. lovely imagery, fluid language.. a wonderful romantic piece.