Joining Hands

Trembling with fear of the forgotten ages

Twitching with anxiety

Deciding to make the changing move

Closing the unforgetable deal

 

Some are decorative

Some are just plain

With the smoothest touch

To the roughest grip

 

Make the move

The deciding move to change

Change this world

End this long war

 

Be brave little ones

Give a strong sencere hug

It's not today that makes it

Nor is it the dark

 

Make this magical moment

Join together in harmony

It may only last for a few moments

But moments that will make a difference

 

Change the future

You have the power

Change the future

End this war

All by joining hands...

Reviews

[SilentLullabies]

I never thought of joining hands that way. Wonderful write

[Murtuza]

A good message from an inspiring poem. Nice job :)

[Ravyne Hawke]

What an inspiring poem, Shiningwolf. Such power in your words and a message of hope and goodwill. Excellent job!

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

Joining hands across the world, inspirational poem my friend.

[BlackMoonRising]

It think of this as the end of the world. When it comes...I believe we must 'Join Hands' Great job as always

[KAREN]

Beautiful!! We all could learn from this poem, we need to join hands and stand together!

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

One word, AMEN!

[Dilan Gray]

I like the message in this poem and I liked the flow. This poem was really good.

[Lily Mae]

I liked this nice positve read of hope.. If we as a human race could get it together it would be nice..but theres always those who block the link...and stop holding the hand.. Great write..xxx

[SpokenWord]

I think we all know that we can get along but I also know that man loves war more than love. Great poem of hope and peace