Death's Final Moments

Losing all feeling

Cold to the very core

The core of my dead body

Helpless in the eyes of the beholder

 

Emptiness wrapped up in loneliness

Baked with the burning fire of a thousand suns

Awakening on the inside

What a beautiful lie

 

Flames engulfing my body

My entire existence up in flames

No second chances

Feeling an uplifting

 

A strike of light enters in before me

Ashes falling around bones

Glowing light so blinding

Piercing through my cold dead heart

 

Floating in mid-air

What has been done

Can never be repeated

Laughing with the ignorant human race

 

Clearing up the spots of blur

Paving images into my soul

Carving it deep with unwashed blood

Losing sight of reality

 

Losing my ties

Breaking off the binding chain

Fading away slowly

Sparkling with new found passion

 

No senses

And no feelings

A sense of perfection

Is finally achieved

 

When will you feel it?...

 

 

Reviews

[JanuaryDreamer♥]

I can relate well to this........

[Ravyne Hawke]

I love losing the self in this, ending to becoming.. excellent write!

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

Death is the beginning of something new, we wonder what awaits us after our last moment. Loved your poem.

[Elliot Kyron]

Fantastic write. So many emotions are woven into this piece. Well done.

[Lily Mae]

Wow... I love this for so many reasons.. This is a great write.. :)xx