The Animal Inside

This feeling

Coursing through my veins

I can't sense what this is

But it's trying to change my name.

 

My body is tingling

I can feel the adrenaline rush rise

What is happening to me?

I cannot decide.

 

My body is building

Like it's preparing to attack

What is going on?

I can't turn my back!

 

The heat is rising

My chest is pulsing

It's getting faster

And I smell revolting.

 

BURSTING out like lighting speed

I am on the attack

You better watch out

These claws are going into your back!

 

I scream to the top of my lungs

Let these insects hear my mighty ROAR!
I have become an animal

For this I am sure.

 

No longer am I innocent

No longer am I sweet

After what these monsters done

I WILL NOT BE BEAT!

 

Take heed to these words

You insolent little pests

You knocked me down once

But now I am better than all the rest!

Author's Note

Alright, in this poem the speaker can be whoever and what happened is whatever you want to be. I made this so you all can use your imagination and create the story to this :) It's a little experiment.

Reviews

[SpokenWord]

People can only be pushed so much before they rise and fight back. This person seems determined and knowing of their on powers and ability. I like the action build up in this poem and how you let our imagination take over.

[Deactivated_BurningDemo..]

Amazing. I want to keep reading this poem. It was easy to read, so easy in fact I almost read it twice. Keep up the amazing work.

[Laranda]

I love this!!! good thing you experimented, now imagine how good something will be if you really tried! right on keep it up.

[Libby]

I agree with Chloe. Awesome, n.n

[♥Chloe-The-Zombi..]

this is good!! i love this poem. great job! 100/100

[patricia]

to me it was somebody injecting themselves with some sort of drug, it felt a little aggressive, and I felt worried for the user, but I kind of liked the I'm standing up for myself assertion at the end. I hope you aren't offended at my lack of knowledge where poetry is concerned...just tell me to shut up and I will, I think you write some real good stuff...Thankyou