The Animal Inside

This feeling

Coursing through my veins

I can't sense what this is

But it's trying to change my name.

 

My body is tingling

I can feel the adrenaline rush rise

What is happening to me?

I cannot decide.

 

My body is building

Like it's preparing to attack

What is going on?

I can't turn my back!

 

The heat is rising

My chest is pulsing

It's getting faster

And I smell revolting.

 

BURSTING out like lighting speed

I am on the attack

You better watch out

These claws are going into your back!

 

I scream to the top of my lungs

Let these insects hear my mighty ROAR!
I have become an animal

For this I am sure.

 

No longer am I innocent

No longer am I sweet

After what these monsters done

I WILL NOT BE BEAT!

 

Take heed to these words

You insolent little pests

You knocked me down once

But now I am better than all the rest!

Author's Note

Alright, in this poem the speaker can be whoever and what happened is whatever you want to be. I made this so you all can use your imagination and create the story to this :) It's a little experiment.

Reviews

[Kala Benfield]

So many ideas popped into my mind. I love it ! good work ! (:

[lovejulez03]

I really liked the way you wrote this! Definitely allows you to take it and twist it into whatever your heart feels or desires. Well done! :)

[Lost-in-Fantasy16]

LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
SO many possiblies and rythmns

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Love the imagery, You've been knocked down one to many times now your a beast ready to attack!

[xjust-for-me.x]

Lol the beast within takes over every once and awhile and we must release it. Truly says what alot of us feel at time.

[Rose Masen]

I loved it. It was fierce and intense.

[KAREN]

Love the words in this poem you used. Love how you was creative, and the imagery too was great!

[ShaneBerry]

wow! i have a poem that has the same feel of this poem, it is called "like a hundred million suns" you may enjoy it lol. very nice write, the flow was good, and the rhyme scheme was all over the place which is always good. very nice write my friend.

[RainbowFlower]

The "little experiment" worked! Or at least it did for me!

[cfix]

I really like this one. People can only take so much until they make a stand for themself. I enjoyed this write. Very well done!!!