Mighty Storm

Thunder roars

When the heavens scream

Hiding a secret

Within this obscure scene.

 

Lightning blazes

Striking down,

All battle seen faces

Without even a sound.

 

Rain falls

Powerful tears

Come crashing down

Washing away all fears.

 

Wind gathers energy

And gives a mighty blow

Take your stance

And wait for it to slow.

 

The wonders of nature

All wrapped into one

Don't get trapped in it

Or your life could be done.

Reviews

[howlfjdks]

Great story of a storm; wrapped in a poem.

[Madison A. Wright]

love the flow and rhythm to this poem.. mother nature is very powerful and i felt you have done her justice in this poem!

[pheasant]

A crafty piece here packs a wallop... write on

[Rose Masen]

Ooo. In the midst of a storm. I got the feeling that the meaning wasn't actually a person PHYSICALLY in the midst of the storm, but maybe MENTALLY they were. Just my interpretation. None the less, it was an amazing piece.

[Holiday Sparkle]

I think this could be very good. I do not know why, but I feel as though something is missing.

[Frankie Nguyen]

very simple. I liked it.

[Crayon]

This is pretty good.

[♥Kaitlyn♥]

very good write

[lovejulez03]

I liked this poem, it was simple and powerful. Well done.

[Michael.]

Very nice.