Burning Passion!

This amazing sensation

It builds inside me

Watch it blow

And go out of control.

 

No one will know

What happens tonight

It will remain between us

If not, we will put up a fight

 

Your body is like art

Your kisses I adore

Watch the heat rise

As clothes fall on the floor.

 

Our bodies collide

Feeling the love tonight

It's out of this world

It's out of sight.

 

Your warmth is amazing

I hope mine is too

As we complete this untilmate vow

May this love stay true.

 

 

Reviews

[SpokenWord]

It is an amazing sensation, passion is like a gift for us to enjoy and one we never grow tired of. I really like the ending to this poem. "As we complete this ultimate vow" It can be or should be a joining of two soles and not just the flesh. A beautiful poem one with passion and love.

[Lost-in-Fantasy16]

really really good
makes love seem so innocent and passionate

[Colleen C Dunphy]

Lovely passion brought to life.

[Madison A. Wright]

i really enjoy this...these lines:

No one will know
What happens tonight
It will remain between us

make me feel like its an affair or something on the down low. which makes this burn with even more passion. daring, full of emotion, and shows true passion.

[Denise]

ahh... young love, so refreshing

[cfix]

This is wonderful, ever so lovely!

[♥Kaitlyn♥]

very good poem

[Greg Skura]

Great Poem! Full of passion and sweet innocence. Well Done!

[Jessica Marlow]

OMG!!! I love it

[BrokenLight]

wow!, amazing poem!