Dream I'll Always Remember

This place is amazing

Let this warmth surround me

I feel so loved

I feel like I am free.

 

This happiness is a gift, from the heavens above

I have never seen so much magic before

This place is amazing

I can't hold my feelings in anymore!

 

Let this rush fill me

I have to explore more

With this dark lightened sky

I could just fall to the floor.

 

This place I thought only existed in dreams

I was honestly wrong

I feel at peace

So much I could even sing a song.

 

A song that comes from the heart

With a voice like an angel

May this land hear me

And make me an archangel.

 

I want to be the purest of all

And rule this magic land

With all my loved ones

Holding hands.

 

The moment is now

Then a loud sound became scary

I open my eyes

And become weary.

 

It was only a dream

As I watch the rain fall

I can only imagine what wonders I saw

And now I feel so tall.

 

Reviews

[A]

Heart-felt poem, kinda spoke to me... The flow was good as well

[howlfjdks]

I love my dreams both awake and asleep. True magic, dreams are.

[Frankie Nguyen]

this is very nice. I love how it flowed.

[BlackMoonRising]

I could careless about words, emotions is what makes this great. Never forget that the real things come from the heart, and I sense that this did. Great job.

[♥Kaitlyn♥]

I love it :D
I love everything about this poem...
From the emotions to the wording..
Very good read :)