The Answer

What is the answer?

I just have to know

What is it?

Please tell me before I go.

 

I don't know what to say

When I get there

Please don't keep me at bay

Look at us just stare.

 

What is life?

I just have to know

What is life?

Tell me before I go.

 

Life is what you make it

It is what you want it to be

This answer is not two-bit.

Now go on and be free.

 

Life is meant to live to the fullest

Don't waste it away

No sense trying to be the coolest

Life is how you convey.

 

Never forget these words

Because you will see one day

That you can be like a bird

Fly free

And remember this you can't replay.

Reviews

[Greg Skura]

Great Poem here! Live the moment because you never know when the last one will come!

[♥Kaitlyn♥]

it's good!
Like i said in the other poem i would play with the words.. you know like make it more intense

[Lost-in-Fantasy16]

Like it very light and deep at the same time very good. I really really like this

[Michael.]

I wasn't really happy with this one.
The vocabulary wasn't really cool and I could find the rhythm you were going for very well.
And it seemed kind of cliche idea even thats not important if the idea is cliche.
It seems like how you said the idea was cliche.

[Madison A. Wright]

Carpe diem ('seize the day')! This is all i could think of when reading this poem.. Live life to the fullest.. you never know when its your last day! Nice poem, well written! Thank you for sharing this! :)

[Crayon]

Hm. I don't like this one as much as the other's I've read. Now that might just be because I'm not a big fan of poetry written around the topic of life, as in go out and live your life, like that one. So, Don't take this review too harshly, but Definately not my favorite.