Lonely Death

A girl commits suicide.

What is wrong with her?

All alone

Once was pure

Now becomes unknown.

 

Death is near

As she lies there

She has no fear

She never had care.

 

Tears fade

Heart becomes cold

Never was aid

Her bell has tolled.

 

Gun beside her

Waiting for that last beat

Life becomes a blurr

As she falls into a deep sleep.

Reviews

[J.M]

Kind of deep and ambiguous, but with imagery vivid enough to imply what was not directly stated. Good job on this - short but effective.