Why?

Why?

A Poem by Crystal Marie Rome
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One glass after three falls,
Two dimes after two lullabies,
Why, Why did the child scream?
Why, Why, Why, Why, Why,
Did the child scream?
Why?
Did the child scream?
Why?
Did the child?
Why?
Did the?
Why?
Did.
The.
Child.
Scream?
Oh Why?

Did the child let it fall,
To the ground,
Away from, 
Away from us.
To the ground, 
Falling swiftly now.

To the ground, 
I scream, 
I scream,
Why?

To fire, To fire, To fire,
I Scream.

Why?
Did you let it fall?

© 2011 Crystal Marie Rome


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the addition of question only adds to the wonder within your poem and mystery of cause and effect :)

Posted 12 Years Ago
Why? This poem is entertaining. The ending was nicely written. I'm glad that you come up with a new idea always.

Posted 13 Years Ago
I unexplainably like this poem. I don't know why, i just get this feeling when I read it. And, thats good btw. (:

Posted 13 Years Ago
There are times when some poems render me speechless. This is one of those times. Congratulations, Crystal Marie Rome.

Posted 13 Years Ago

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 Added on September 30, 2011
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Crystal Marie Rome
Crystal Marie Rome

Barre, VT



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Hello! I'm Crystal Marie (Marie is not my middle name it is part of my first name) ! I love reading and writing and I've been trying to do my best at both of those things. My three favorite animal are.. more..

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