We Ran Away

This is only the second song I've written. I have no experience with instruments so this will just remain a poem. *sigh* Please Comment!

(Girl)

It was, yesterday,

When you took my hand.

It was yesterday,

When you got down on one knee.

It was yesterday,

When you said,

(Boy)

Baby let's, Baby lets,

Run Away!

To a place, To a place, far way,

From here.

(Girl)

I, I don't take it.

You, you don't make it.

We, we don't let it,

No, no we don't Baby.

(Boy)

I, i don't make it.

You, you don't take it.

We, we don't let it,

No, no we don't Baby.

(Girl)

So I took your hand,

And Ran Away,

To the big City, far away.

(Girl)

I, I don't take it.

You, you don't make it.

We, we don't let it,

No, no we don't Baby.

(Boy)

I, I don't make it.

You, you don't take it.

We, we don't let it.

No, no we don't Baby.

(Boy)

Now Baby I may be,

Jobless and broke,

And the way some men may treat you,

Is against the book,

But I know dear, Yes I know dear,

That our love is true!

(Girl)

I, I don't take it.

You, you don't make it.

We, we don't let it,

No, no we don't Baby.

(Boy)

I, I don't make it.

You, you don't take it.

We, we don't let it.

No, no we don't Baby.

(Girl)

I, I don't take it.

You, you don't make it.

We, we don't let it,

No, no we don't Baby.

(Boy)

I, I don't make it.

You, you don't take it.

We, we don't let it.

No, no we don't Baby.

Author's Note

Please Comment!!! =)

Reviews

[Emunah June.]

WOW!! Tragedy and romance all rolled into one vivid poem! I really liked it!!

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oh my god! its so cute!!! heehee aww shows the connection of love between a boy and girl and how potent it sounds. can' wait to see

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[Violeta]

I so wish I could hear you sing or hum this, like Dark Rose said! :) I quite liked it though, good job ^.^

[Rose of Gondor]

I LOVE THIS!!!! You should definitely write a tune for it. Just looking at it I'm thinking it's a wonderful poem to make into a song! It doesn't HAVE to be played with an instrument. You can just hum it! And sing it a cappella! It would be awesome to hear this!