My King

I got stuck on the second chapter of Princess of the Seven Snakes so I thought writing this would loosen up my writing mind. Please Comment! =)

You lived your life,

Through all those trials, 

All those pains.

You lived through it all,

You kept a smile on your face. 

So I thank you,

for being strong. 

And I honor you, 

For your spirit.

And I bow to you,

For your iron will.

You lived your life,

Through all those trials,

All those pains.

I thank you,

I honor you,

I bow to you,

My King.

Author's Note

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Reviews

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Hee Hee ^-^ made me smile, i really liked it, a nice enjoyable read!

[Mehul Rwat]

You've got a nice way to rest your mind - writing a poem when you are stuck in writing a book. I will also try it if I ever write a book. The poem is nice too!

[Violeta]

Bea-utiful! :) The flow feels a bit choppy though... maybe add onto some of your short stanzas, like the two liners. Keep it up!

[Rose of Gondor]

This is kind is the greatest kind of king! A king in in spirit. Wonderfully written and makes me tear up just a little...