I Watch You

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I'm going to tell you a story,

A story about me and you.

I fell in love with someone,

Someone a lot like you.

But I know he never loved me,

I know he never will.

I could climb every mountain,

I could swim across the sea,

I could run 1000 miles,

If only he could be with me.

But alas,

He won't even turn my way,

Alas it is all so true.

I know about life,

About trials and tribulations.

And I know life's not a fairy tale.

And I'll cry,

Till I become a teardrop.

And I'll cry,

Till I become a star.

And though sometimes,

The sky will be clouded over,

I'll shine through to you.

And I'll watch you for all eternity,

I'll always be shining through.

And when you die,

I'll still be watching,

Still watching you.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Mehul Rwat]

The emotions really 'Moved' (with a capital M) me. So keep goin..

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Fanfriggingtastic! With two snaps and smile! You touched my heart. :') Life is so not fair!!!

[Rose of Gondor]

Awwwww.... this is so sad.....Life isn't a fairy tale, is it? Prince Charming isn't always there. Worse, Prince Charming doesn't always notice you. Easy to relate to, although I've no experience in relationships like this. Love the lines

'And I'll cry,
Till I become a teardrop.
And I'll cry,
Till I become a star"

Beautifully, wonderfully done. ^.^ Oh, and thanks for the reviews! I log on to writerscafe and find them staring at me in the face and I start giggling and dancing about the room. Thanks!