As I Cry Myself to Sleep

This is something I wrote down in a n old journal a while ago and I thought that it was okay so I decided to put it on Writerscafe. Please Comment! =)

Fresh tears fall

Down my face

As I cry myself to Sleep.

My peace 

I will never keep.

As I cry myself to Sleep.

Author's Note

Please Comment! =)

Reviews

[Mehul Rwat]

I'm out of words for your nice poems- you see! =)

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Awww! :') I know that feeling

[Rose of Gondor]

Beautifully written. The flow was perfect, and the words fit together smoothly. Very sad in a lovely way. :)

[Thea]

Hi...This is certainly usual...I like it...But...In my opinion you should further express the idea of this poem...Anyway, this is poignant but I bet if you'll continue this writing, it would be really great... :)))
Good luck and have a great time here...