Freedom

Basically a poem about freedom.

When the Stars reach the Sun,

When the Moon is at its Peak,

Let Freedom Reign.

When the Clouds stretch across the Sky,

When the time comes to say Goodbye,

Let Freedom Reign.

The Time comes for Everyone Someday,

Don't cry when it comes near,

Just let your Heart be Free. 

Don't forget those you've met,

When you let Freedom Reign. 

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what's wicked is how you used nature in your poem to show how there isn't such things as limits in the land which inspires me always and now even more from your incredible poem :D

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the desire of this poem. Using the words freedom and making the poem of wisdom for a good life in your words. A very strong ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Rose of Gondor]

LOVE THIS!!! Love the flow, the word choice. You created this very refreshing new look on freedom. I love the way you wrote it.

:) :) :) !!! Good job!!!