Love Me or Hate Me

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May I take thee by the hand?

May I stake my life on thee?

May I?

Who shall stop me if I do?

Who shall bop me if I don't?

Who?

Will I pledge my love to you?

Will this fledgling love come true?

Will it?

Can I kiss you in the dark?

Can I miss you all day long?

Can I?

Love me?

Hate me?

Take me?

Break me?

Sate me?

Fate me?

Love me?

Or hate me?

Author's Note

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Reviews

[chaias1]

I think there is need to be improved, add some romantic word which adorn poet.

[haymaker14]

I like it! It was very interesting . I liked the older choice of words, it made the poem more interesting! May I praise thee? ;)