How Hard

Has it really been that hard?

 

when loving and forgiving

don't go hand and hand

 

when temptation isn't blocked

by I Love You

 

when deception and doubt

are the only colors that you see

 

tell me, is loving me harder

than loving you through

you loving me?

Reviews

[Blank_fortunes]

wel I think that is about deep as it comes i read it twice to make sure I read it right not the whole poet I read it 6 times exactly so far but the phrase " Is loving me harder than loving you through Loving me?" went too deep into my personal bank account. I appreciate this poem.

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Loving and forgiving don't always hold hands but they always walk together. Great!

[TQ]

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I have one words " Stupendous "! This the most beautiful I ever read, at first I asked isn't it short? but the effect I got me was soooo much! Its a kind of poem that spins my head, and I end up saying WOOW! ( in a good way ) so, keep it up, Dear friend :)

Regards..
TQ