Unfiltered

Unfiltered

A Poem by Crystal Overmeyer-Birmingham

In a world 
where pain is beauty 
and suffering is fashion 
you make sweatpants look sexy. 
I crave your 
messy hair  
and unabridged authenticity
holding out your hand
you say 
there is nothing more attractive 
than a woman comfortable in her own skin
I smile 
rolls and blemishes 
and relish in
the cozy haze 
of unfiltered love 

© 2016 Crystal Overmeyer-Birmingham


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I know I'm half a year late, but I did miss you writing Crystal!

Posted 8 Years Ago


...ah a woman comfortable in her own skin what a sight to see....for that I think i just might..get on bended knee....loved this...but i love all your work so no surprise there:)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Crystal Overmeyer-Birmingham

8 Years Ago

Thank You, sorry i suck that responding to reviews, but i really do appreciate the reviews
Short poems in my eyes are the best and this one is so raw with emotions. Really good Crystal.

Posted 8 Years Ago


This is a beautiful write Crystal... and it's true. Nothing sexier than a woman comfortable in her own skin and nothing more awesome than a guy who loves her for who she is. A perfect combination :) Great work :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


This is beautiful, really enjoyed reading this
'the cozy haze
of unfiltered love' - its the best kind:)
Thank you for sharing this great piece!

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Crystal, This is great. You pepper the piece with writing flecked with negative connotations ('pain is beauty' and 'messy hair'), suggesting a couple finding each other, avoiding each's imperfections but fitting into a comfortable mold. The perfect relationship? Yeah, that is exactly the kind that has the staying power to last, holding hands and giggling. Super write! take care...dan

Posted 8 Years Ago


I love it!
It's short but yet it has so much emotion!
Keep it up!

Posted 8 Years Ago


'pain is beauty' and 'suffering is fashion' wow!! I loved it....One of the truest thought i have ever found here....Very good work....

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Crystal Overmeyer-Birmingham
Crystal Overmeyer-Birmingham

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I am a poet by nature. Words just speak to me and color my world. I away think of poetry as painting with phases, just as vibrant and life giving as they are messy and complex. more..

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