Your Death

Your death has come along
Silently at your door it rang
Too late for you to right your wrongs
Were the words of its song

Your death has come along
To its shackles you now belong
Lost to you your sense of right and wrong
Are the words of its song

Reviews

[first second third]

short but tells true meaning and very accurate very nice

[Daegal]

Oh I like this. I like dark stuff. If I may make a few suggestions??

Your death is near not long
Silently at your door it rings
Too late to right your wrongs
Whisper words of its song

Thy death is near not long
To its shackles you now belong
Lost thy sense in battles throng
Whisper words that now are sung

Hope its ok to toy with it! I like the idea. Cool poem.