Fracto Speculo

Fracto Speculo

A Poem by Crosscasket

When my darkest day
Is my brightest night
Only the broken mirror
Will show true sight
Through a horrible dream
In a wonderful nightmare
The mirrors shard
A key to true way

© 2018 Crosscasket


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Your message is strong & twisted by some torturous soul affliction in an interesting way. I am not a fan of using bland words like "horrible" and "wonderful" -- you could say that in a more sparkling way, possibly using imagery or comparison . . . "a dream as ugly as satan" . . . "a nightmare as irresistible as me" . . . just to show a couple possibilities (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 3 Years Ago



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Added on September 30, 2018
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Crosscasket
Crosscasket

Statesville, NC



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