Sacrifice

Any one or few can sacrifice

Sacrifice

She sacrifice so many things to be the best
She stopped late nights and stopped doing bad
She tried her best to stay out of troubles
Even when it comes she avoids
All she was looking for was peace
Because there is nothing better than peace

He sacrifice so many things to be the best
He stopped late nights and stopped doing bad
He tried his best to stay out of fighting
Even when it comes he avoids
All he was looking for was joy
Because there is nothing better than joy

They sacrifice so many things to be the best
They stopped late nights and stopped doing bad
They tried their best to stay out of conflict
Even when it comes they avoid
All they were looking for was happiness
Because there is nothing better than happiness


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Reviews

[Vol]

Crosby, I really like that you used your own voice in this poem. Many poets try to write like someone else because they are afraid to use their own voice. yours is strong.
Vol

[Crosby Idasa]

Thank you Vol, I really appreciate your review