Creating the right place

How to live a good life with a good foundation

Strong foundation should be laid at the start of every moves
it keeps you comfortable even when things feels shaky
It makes you confident and bold even when things seems like falling
Start with a foundation strong as rock

Locate where you have to build your life
Environment plays a role in building
Let it be in a solid ground, a place where you can find and get peace, love, joy, prosperity and long life.
Don't build your life in a flooded place

Who do you surround yourself with
are they really the people that ignite positive light
if you are seen with a thief then you be refer to as a thief
But if you seen with the right set of circle, likewise you will be seen as a right person

everybody in the universe should be something
it is now the time of choice, everyone have to choose who to be
there is nobody without a choice
some choose to be good while others choose to be bad
some choice are hidden but at the end it will be revealed
Choose well.

ICE

Author's Note

Please review this and tell what you feel

Reviews

[olla]

it is really hard to write in a language that is not one's native tongue.. you did a very good job.. there are a few places that I am not sure if you meant it the way you wrote it or if you are still having some difficulty with past and present tense and such.. mostly just some small grammar things that leave the reader trying to decide.. there is nothing wrong if it is what you intended.. YOU are the ALMIGHTY AUTHOR and it is your choice.. the ideas you presented are clearly defined even with these small considerations.. you did very well..

[Crosby Idasa]

Okay, thanks for your review. English is the first and official language of my country.

[olla]

ah.. I am so sorry.. I assumed.. never a good thing to do.. I did enjoy your piece..

[Crosby Idasa]

Lol... It's okay

[olla]

that's very gracious of you.. we don't always realize how limited our vision is until something happens to remind us that the world doesn't end on our own door step..

[Crosby Idasa]

Yea, that's true. I'm just a writer who tries his best to pen down something cool. I paid your page a visit, you got good write ups

[olla]

thank you.. I'll be nosing around yours some more I am sure..

[Crosby Idasa]

Thanks, we can be friends

[olla]

if a stranger is just a friend I haven't met yet than I think we already are.. :)

[Crosby Idasa]

Lol... You are far away and even when we haven't met we can do more than friends

[Fran Marie]

yes most important
to build a strong
foundation and
also ones character

we are often judge
by the company we
keep and we all know
there's no honor among
thrives.therefore.we
should choose wisely

nicely penned

[Crosby Idasa]

Thank you so much for your kind review, choosing wisely is the ultimate in life

[Coyote Poetry]

Very wise advice shared Crosby.
"Locate where you have to build your life
Environment plays a role in building
Let it be in a solid ground, a place where you can find and get peace, love, joy, prosperity and long life.
Don't build your life in a flooded place"
The above lines should be common sense. I saw houses on the California fault line. Common sense isn't so common, sometimes. Hello my friend and thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote.

[Gaurav]

its a very simple but powerful moral poem and i think should be told to people...i really liked it