My innermost me

Just a piece for all trying to be awakened, keep trying

I was sad and lost of worlds, my eyes were getting reddish my tears was about to drip.
I couldn't even say a word all I was doing that time was to wrap marijuana and sip on Stout mixed with palm wine!

Oh my soul, they have played with you carelessly and they are trying to destroy the body!

Oh my innermost me, when will you wake, when will you do all the greatest manifestation of this moment and the future...is it today or tomorrow or when?

My innermost me, all you're seeking is to get it from the right point, is it left or right!


I need to actualise my real reason for being alive, all I need is to make use of my innermost desirable soul, I need to so I can touch the universe and feel it!

ICE

Author's Note

What do you think about this

Reviews

[KWP]

What do I think about this? Well, I love the first line - great visual there.

I think we have all been here, in this time and space the narrator talks of. I also believe there are many avenues to take to touch the universe, grab at reality, swim in love, flatten into equanimity. If we unfetter, allow ourselves to dissipate, learn to practice acceptance at all levels - well then we are half way there.

What is our reason to be alive? Well of me it is so we can keep on creating, keep pushing the outer edges of reality further and further and in our own uniqueness, we are able to push, shove, gently nudge and the expansion just keeps on rolling out. keeping the motion, never settling in, realising change is constant and it is up to us if we ebb or if we flow.

Nice words to bounce off of. Great words to allow me to deep dive into self.

nice to meet you :d

[Crosby Idasa]

Thank you my dear KWP, your review means a lot. You are a good writer, reading your review will extend me to your wall. Thanks

[KWP]

well thanks ;) and you are most welcome X

[Mark Mendoza]

A tale of a being frozen, searching for the origin of being. Grabbing all external things to see something, yet there he stays, frozen with everything. A true tale, as true as true can be. Thank you for sharing this great work!

[Crosby Idasa]

Thank you for your review

[Coyote Poetry]

I felt the deep thoughts and the struggle. All of us ask, what is our purpose and reason to be alive. I liked the honest tone leading to the proper ending. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry my friend.
Coyote

[Crosby Idasa]

You are welcome Coyote, I should be saying thank you for your great review

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked this one and you are welcome Crosby.