The presence shows

The presence shows

A Poem by Crosby Idasa
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The truth of the matter

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                         What if everybody in the world existed a numerous time
                                       even if you try to hide your identity
                                             even if your looks changes 
                                                 the presence shows
                                                      you were 
                                                         here 

© 2019 Crosby Idasa


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I enjoy your poem - I really like the shape - and I like that it is a question :-) - and that it ends without a full stop - just like life goes on.
Tina

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Crosby  Idasa

5 Years Ago

Thank you for your review...
I liked the logic of the words shared my friend. Every person is a light of life. Powerful and wonderful poetry shared. I enjoyed this one.
Coyote

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Crosby  Idasa

5 Years Ago

thank you for your review, so motivating
Coyote Poetry

5 Years Ago

You are welcome Crosby. I enjoyed this poem.
Quite a thought if everybody existed numerous times. Especially if their character didn't change and they just happened to be evil.

Chris

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Crosby  Idasa

5 Years Ago

Thank you for your review, nice one
Crosby  Idasa

4 Years Ago

People existed numerous times

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Crosby  Idasa
Crosby Idasa

Port Harcourt, Rivers state, Nigeria



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