No peace

No peace

A Poem by Crosby Idasa
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a world with no peace

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A world Where you can't find peace
that is just the situation we find here 
In a family there is a fight, in a country there is a war
so many are in tears for the sake of drown peace
painful deeds everywhere because there is no love 
within where you can't find peace there is no joy
A planet of cruel doings, that is earth for you

© 2018 Crosby Idasa


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Sadly so spot on and so very true your poem. Powerful, heartfelt and very meaningful. Makes you hate humans and this world sometimes. When hurt, sadness and death just is fact.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Crosby  Idasa

5 Years Ago

Nice review you went deep into it, heartfelt and and very meaningful is powerful... Hurt, sadnes.. read more
Onlyme

5 Years Ago

exactly. Life is harsh and cruel. Then when heaven comes we are at peace.
Few cry out for Syria, few cry out for many places being slowly killed. Hard to understand the murdering of people for the sake of war. Your words. Powerful and heartfelt.
Coyote

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Crosby  Idasa

5 Years Ago

Just so bad the world go through all this, thanks for your good review
Coyote Poetry

5 Years Ago

You are welcome Crosby.
I recognise the message in your lines. Sadly we are an intolerant lot, and the world we live in is far from peaceful. We have much work to do. Much truth in your lines Crosby. All good wishes and Merry Christmas.

Chris

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is so true, This world has issues, but we can't stop living.
This is so very good and I love the truth in it.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Crosby  Idasa

5 Years Ago

Thank you Brandie Jade, I wish everybody can be genuine

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Port Harcourt, Rivers state, Nigeria



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