No peace

a world with no peace

A world Where you can't find peace

that is just the situation we find here 

In a family there is a fight, in a country there is a war

so many are in tears for the sake of drown peace

painful deeds everywhere because there is no love 

within where you can't find peace there is no joy

A planet of cruel doings, that is earth for you

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Onlyme]

Sadly so spot on and so very true your poem. Powerful, heartfelt and very meaningful. Makes you hate humans and this world sometimes. When hurt, sadness and death just is fact.

[Crosby Idasa]

Nice review you went deep into it, heartfelt and and very meaningful is powerful... Hurt, sadness and death just a painful feeling in earth until Heaven comes

[Onlyme]

exactly. Life is harsh and cruel. Then when heaven comes we are at peace.

[Coyote Poetry]

Few cry out for Syria, few cry out for many places being slowly killed. Hard to understand the murdering of people for the sake of war. Your words. Powerful and heartfelt.
Coyote

[Crosby Idasa]

Just so bad the world go through all this, thanks for your good review

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Crosby.

[Chris Shaw]

I recognise the message in your lines. Sadly we are an intolerant lot, and the world we live in is far from peaceful. We have much work to do. Much truth in your lines Crosby. All good wishes and Merry Christmas.

Chris

[Jade]

This is so true, This world has issues, but we can't stop living.
This is so very good and I love the truth in it.

[Crosby Idasa]

Thank you Brandie Jade, I wish everybody can be genuine