multiple colors

Beginners poem

Love is found where there is a sign of living

Most things seen in this place might be soft

but the colors that rules here is red and white

this feeling is predictable but can be controlled 

Hate is found where there is a sign of living

Every thing seen in this place might be hard

and the colors that rules here is black and dark

this feeling is predictable but can be controlled

Peace is found where there is a sign of living

Every thing seen in this place might be quiet 

and the colors that rules here is blue and purple

this feeling is predictable but can be controlled

Danger is found where there is a sign of living

Most things seen in this place might be bloody

and the colors that rule here is red and black

this feeling is not predictable but can be controlled

Author's Note

Old time poem

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Great use of words and thoughts Crosby. Places where hate and separation is alive. A pit for violence and war. We must teach the children well. Lead with concern, kindness and to listen. Powerful and worthwhile words shared my friend.
Coyote

[Crosby Idasa]

Thank you Coyote, good review from you always

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.

[augustus]

I liked that a lot! Good writing and enjoyable.

[Crosby Idasa]

Thank you so much, I pray my ink do not finish... Endless ink

[Jade]

Now this is a write, Awesome write here. I really like this. The world is a dark, lonely place. Nice job

[Crosby Idasa]

Thank you my friend, writing needs a special motivation

[likesgreeneggsandham]

Interesting read, I'm definitely intrigued. I like how the form of the poem reflects the sense of control. The soul of the place reflected in colour is also a very interesting concept.

[Crosby Idasa]

Thank you for your good review...

[Suhd]

It's a good one, man. You gave each color a feeling.

[Crosby Idasa]

thank you for your review, every color mean something