The rain

The rain

A Poem by Crosby Idasa
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Just how wonderful the tears of heaven gives

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Pour down the rain, let it be heavy, let the sky be rainbow, even when the weather trembles, it gives a passionate feeling...


Cool and calm atmosphere it drops on you when it drips down
When it touches the body the soul is renewed
Just how fulfilling the tears from heaven is, it gets down and washes away the dirt of the world , just how amazing!

Let the Angels cry and let the sky pour out more tears, wet the world and let green vegetation bloomsome! The Earth is dark and in brightness what we get is not what we wished...

Pour down the rain, let the sky be rainbow again, the stain of the world is dark, let the rain wash away the pain, and let the lost smiles be revived anew!

Pour down the rain...

Crosby Idasa

© 2020 Crosby Idasa


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Crosby  Idasa
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Rain can be a blessing and can be dangerous.
"Pour down the rain, let the sky be rainbow again, the stain of the world is dark, let the rain wash away the pain, and let the lost smiles be revived anew! "
I liked the above lines. After the rain. The earth come alive. Thank you Crosby for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote


Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Crosby  Idasa

5 Years Ago

thank you so much
Coyote Poetry

5 Years Ago

You are welcome Crosby.



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such wonderful imagery in this write.

Pour down the rain, let the sky be rainbow again, the stain of the world is dark, let the rain wash away the pain, and let the lost smiles be revived anew!

Such a powerful and wonderful imagery here in these lines. Only if the rain would wash away the pain, and hate of the world. This is so good.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Crosby  Idasa

5 Years Ago

thank you, only if it will... Remember, God used the flood to wipe away the sins and evil of the ear.. read more
Lovely imagery in your lines of rainfall. Refreshing and aiding growth. Wet, wetter, wettest. I like the idea of the rain washing away the earth's pain.

Chris

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Crosby  Idasa

5 Years Ago

thank you Chris
Chris Shaw

5 Years Ago

You are welcome.
Rain can be a blessing and can be dangerous.
"Pour down the rain, let the sky be rainbow again, the stain of the world is dark, let the rain wash away the pain, and let the lost smiles be revived anew! "
I liked the above lines. After the rain. The earth come alive. Thank you Crosby for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote


Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Crosby  Idasa

5 Years Ago

thank you so much
Coyote Poetry

5 Years Ago

You are welcome Crosby.

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Added on September 8, 2018
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Port Harcourt, Rivers state, Nigeria



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