In the Mountains

Inspired by the Rocky Mountain National Park.

In the Mountains

We hike from ground to high,

enthusiasm drifting with us all the way.

In the middle of the mountain,

we made furry friends.

As we got closer, I could smell sweet air,

see evergreen trees, as luscious clouds were above us.

White snow below us.

When I looked around, I knew I was in the mountains. 

Author's Note

Thanks for reading! What do you think?

*The picture is my own, I took it.

Reviews

[SpiceCookie]

Very pretty imagery and word choices, and I laughed at the furry friends part. Great poem, keep writing!

[Hazel Euy]

Sorry the photo is sideways, I didn't think it would do that.