The Pretty Much Basic Idea

2nd chapter with Elizabeth's POV .

OK,so this bizarre place is not Praintolouppe , it is The Mythical Land of Lili Mai ,existing only when your heart desires . " Not to pop your bubble , but I didn't truly have a "hearts desire" sooooo I really don't know how I got here . What I have found out is from this super huge ,super dusty , super ancient looking book translated to English  {flashback} Study it ,you've got the brains ,and from your thoughts , I've got none ! {over} Okay , Edward, so when could YOU read MINDS ????? and on second thought as well WHYYYYY DID YOU ORDER ME AROUND LIKE THAT ???!!! gosh,I can so squish you like a paper bag ,but on third thought , he did say I've got brains , which is an understatement as  from MY concern , my record from school is as clean as a whistle , (not that whistles are that clean , ) no silent lunch since preschool , no ticket since nursery rhymes , no B or A- since wetting my bed , {3 years old} no report card not clean and sharp since diapers!!!!! Ok , so now for my living accommodations, I live in a very SAFE and STURDY dirt and clay house with a few furnishings  , and I'm alive , (by eating a few cooked eggs over fire and hard bread and chewing gum .....) as FAR as I'm concerned , I share a bunk with Edward ,amazing right ? ,From arch enemies , different leagues to sharing a bunk bed !!!   So Edward's got a tiny idea on how to get to the castle that holds the scroll , He's told me his plan to get to the castle (which includes very possibly swimming in lava and running with lions ) to get the scroll , to get back home to L.A. ( Los Angeles ,you dorks) "Oh Really ??? Oooohhh today's meal is tasty , scrambled eggs and some warm bread and spring water !!! -Well ,got to go , Edward's calling me , talk to you later :)

Author's Note

my next chapter will probably be out next week , no promises . :) :)

Reviews

[SpiceCookie]

Good chapter, although I prefer smaller words. I had to read it 3 times to understand the whole thing btw. try telling who is talking and using more quotation marks when they are speaking. like I said, it was a great chapter when you understand the story! :) Keep writing!

[Hazel Euy]

Thx ,I try to make these chapters as long as possible :)