Ocean

Watery Breeze

Ocean's animals and plants, like it's very own planet .The whales, the sharks , seaweed , turtles , millions of species  in a wonderfully detailed body of plentiful salt water , The Ocean Blue provides for us to ! The fish a kind of wonder deli protein , The plants, as such seaweed, the delicious  crunchy stuff we bunch into our mouths  .

Author's Note

ignore the problems in the writing , my first piece of writing not exactly a poem sorry ............

Reviews

[Emily]

Great poem!
Keep up the great work!!

[SpiceCookie]

Great for your first piece of writing, and very big words... :) It's a good poem. I liked the way you described the way the fish tastes. Keep improving!