My Poems

This was written march 14th 2015, and is how I feel about my poetry.

Writing terrible things

The word choice 

I choose

The worst calamity

As reading on

Booze

Maybe its how

I write--

Might explain 

Many things

The demonstrative power

That memory never

Rings

Hinges towards truth

But falls very short

Tries to bridge the gap

But builds the shanty

Fort.

All alone with words

Never making the connection

The flow itself hurts

But I write

Never making a correction.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Strong thoughts in the poetry.
"The flow itself hurts
But I write
Never making a correction."
I believe we write what we feel. Most writing is free-flowing. I liked the above lines. Sometimes words come from hidden places. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[613]

This was written so well! Great job.

- Brittney

[christopher fox]

Thank you very much!

[613]

You're welcome!