Enlightenment

Ever just "know" something without having been directly or indirectly involved? This is what I experience and I'm desparately trying to get it down on paper.

Suddenly, like a punch in the gut, sheering pain splinters inside me then radiates, stealing the very breath of my lungs and leaving me dazed. As if struck by lightning, an electrical charge surges erratically but purposely to every nerve ending until my brain is lit up with vivid and confusing images; flashes of a moment, a string of events or thoughts and emotion. Most of which are not my own. Blinded from the world around me yet, I see everything so clearly.

Author's Note

WIP- I have no idea where this is taking me and is a work in progress.

Reviews

[KimLove "The Beautiful ..]

Great work in progress I cannot wait to see where it leads. I understand the feelings, but have never had the images. Mine is usually a warning of sorts but I can never quite get the entire picture till it's too late then it is like s**t! that's what that was...

[Maya Storm]

Dream Weaver is right, "Dead Zone" a nail on the head with that one.

Lol, reading this puts me in mind of taking DMT, the feeling of being connected and knowing more than you oath to. Perhaps you are plugged into our collective consciousness and you are pulling from pieces of the entire tapestry.

Please continue I would really love to know where you will be taking this. Keep me posted?

[ImagineItAll]

The first and last sentences are amazing! I can't wait to see where you go with this...

[London]

excellent..vivid,and you have captured this well with your words

[Dream Weaver]

It's called the "Dead Zone" and if you ever seen the movie, you'll see the comparisons you’ll know exactly what I’m getting at…Keep writing a great work in progress…

[Krystal Nicole]

I loved the vvid words you used and I can imagine it very clearly. Powerful. . Great work!!