Mutiny, Thy Name is Beautiful.

A random poem I thought of..

Come closer my sweet

I cannot wait for us to meet.

I will keep you from feeling pain.

In this job I will not fail.

 

I watch you walk.

Oh so slowly

Agonizingly slow

Torturing my tired eyes.

 

I've been waiting on you

for endless days.

Now that you're here,

I will let nothing take you away.

 

I grip the rifle firmly,

adjusting the view in my scope.

Your tyranny took everything

That I once held dear.

 

I squeeze the trigger gently,

and the rifle jumps with joy.

Now the Police have me surrounded.

See you in hell.

Author's Note

Trying to practice with changing tones midway through the poem..

Reviews

[Romina]

its great but intense!

[GraveAngel]

O wow well it could have been taken differently lol
like i did lol

[Cro.Seer]

Actually Grave, re-read the last few stanzas.. It's about the assassination of a dictator by a fanatical rebel.. I just wanted to experiment luring people into a false thought before slapping the true story in, and i guess it worked..

[GraveAngel]

I f*****g adore it! so much! is it about any specific chic though? I didn't know you liked anyone. lol lemme know :)